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My edit instinct has been acting up. I keep searching for the right word instead of just writing. So, here we are.

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[barwatch]

Grunkle. Shift. Barang. Flong. I trank forthright. Glowt. Triskt. Fromt. Greenerty. Frembulance. Flong?

Shamble shift toward touch femme face

Smile

Flats. Grazers spotted crossways out.

Buzzers clink pour plaster

Watchem

Lovem

Hazza day tomorrow

Frunk.


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[walk]

City shamble carry on, honking whoring hellscape

Love it

Concrete carry asphalt up
flats travel movement

Risers windows allem up
craned neckd deliver

*shame*

Eyes down neck down hunch
dog doo lookout
forward

forward

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[run!]

Padding pounding frontward force
frusk fush force

Push it through; pain a farce
frush fush force

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[barwatch]
[commentary]

Grunkle. Shift. Barang. Flong. I trank forthright. Glowt. Triskt. Fromt. Greenerty. Frembulance. Flong?
[I've been struggling with writer's block and now I'm drinking at a bar]

Shamble shift toward touch femme face
[I walked over to a different section to flirt with someone]

Smile
[She liked me being flirty]

Flats. Grazers spotted crossways out.
[Back at the bar (it's flat) and there are people drinking at the other end]

Buzzers clink pour plaster
[Phones buzz, glasses clink, the bartenders pour drinks, I'm drunk]

Watchem
[I watch the bartenders work]

Lovem
[There is a certain pleasure I derive from observing human endeavor]

Hazza day tomorrow
[I need to be productive tomorrow...]

Frunk.
[but I'm drunk]